Tim, You need to upload your remaining notes so I can do a quick review of them. Remember to include questions for further research! Do not be fooled by the small number of sources you have; you will have to do a fair amount of outside research and organizing of information before you begin to write your essay. Chuck
TQR: I am studying Fort Apache, the Bronx and its depiction of the 41st precinct because I want to prove that (Name of director)'s idea was an over-exaggerated and misinformed deduction.
Thesis statement: The idea of the south bronx being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY is rather weak, misinformed and narrow minded according to these statistics.(1)
The film Fort Apache, the Bronx depicts the south bronx as being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY.(2)
(Name of director)'s film Fort apache, the Bronx is a weak and narrow minded depiction of the South bronx in the 1980s. (3)
Fort apache, the bronx essay idea:
-Intro: Introduces idea in an appealing way and ends paragraph with thesis statement. The filmFort apache, the Bronxdepicts the south bronx as being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY. However, present statistics are divergent with this idea. Furthermore, (Name of director)'s idea of the south bronx being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY is rather weak, misinformed and narrow minded according to these statistics.
-Body:
1st- Community tensions/Movie (Complete)
2nd- CAFA (Complete)
3rd- Compare and contrast 41st precinct to the 32nd and 79th precincts(crimes such as Felonious Assault, Murder/non negligible manslaughter, Robbery,etc.)(Complete)
-Conclusion: Deduction
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1978:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
32nd Precinct/Harlem
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 26
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 69
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1393
- Felonious Assault(complaints/witnesses): 635
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1979:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
32nd Precinct/Harlem
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 33
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 99
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1344
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 640
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1980:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
Tim, You need to upload your remaining notes so I can do a quick review of them. Remember to include questions for further research! Do not be fooled by the small number of sources you have; you will have to do a fair amount of outside research and organizing of information before you begin to write your essay. Chuck
TQR: I am studying Fort Apache, the Bronx and its depiction of the 41st precinct because I want to prove that (Name of director)'s idea was an over-exaggerated and misinformed deduction.
Thesis statement: The idea of the south bronx being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY is rather weak, misinformed and narrow minded according to these statistics.(1)
The film Fort Apache, the Bronx depicts the south bronx as being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY.(2)
(Name of director)'s film Fort apache, the Bronx is a weak and narrow minded depiction of the South bronx in the 1980s. (3)
Fort apache, the bronx essay idea:
-Intro: Introduces idea in an appealing way and ends paragraph with thesis statement.
The film Fort apache, the Bronx depicts the south bronx as being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY. However, present statistics are divergent with this idea. Furthermore, (Name of director)'s idea of the south bronx being the most crime ridden and unsafe place to live in NY is rather weak, misinformed and narrow minded according to these statistics.
-Body:
1st- Community tensions/Movie (Complete)
2nd- CAFA (Complete)
3rd- Compare and contrast 41st precinct to the 32nd and 79th precincts(crimes such as Felonious Assault, Murder/non negligible manslaughter, Robbery,etc.)(Complete)
-Conclusion: Deduction
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1978:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
79th precinct/Bedford Stuyvesant
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 69
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 102
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1179
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 787
41st Precinct/South Bronx
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 48
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 58
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 750
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 362
32nd Precinct/Harlem
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 26
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 69
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1393
- Felonious Assault(complaints/witnesses): 635
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1979:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
79th Precinct/Bedford Stuyvesant
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 75
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 101
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1145
- Felonious Assault(complaints/witnesses): 680
41st Precinct/South Bronx
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 33
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 46
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 742
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 293
32nd Precinct/Harlem
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 33
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 99
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1344
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 640
Statistical Report of complaints and arrests in the 79th, 32nd and 41st precincts during the year 1980:
(Crimes mainly revolve around those shown in clips of the movie Fort Apache, the Bronx.)
79th Precinct/Bedford Stuyvesant
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 64
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 82
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1353
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 651
41st Precinct/ South Bronx
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 33
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 31
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1122
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 359
32nd Precinct/Harlem
- Murder and non negligible manslaughter(complaints/witnesses): 25
- Forcible rape(complaints/witnesses): 71
- Robbery(complaints/witnesses): 1662
- Felonious assault(complaints/witnesses): 637
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